. Your first sentence is way too long. It is a run-on sentence. You need to make it shorter. . So when should you go to Norway... (PUNC at the end of the sentence)
Better! Make sure you always have one subject, verb and object in your sentences.
My name is Valaksakorn. I think it is hard to pronounce my name. You can call me "Pui". I'm from Thailand. I love to travel, and this year I will go to Belize, France, St.Maartens, St.Thomas, and Puerto Rico!
. Your first sentence is way too long. It is a run-on sentence. You need to make it shorter.
ReplyDelete. So when should you go to Norway... (PUNC at the end of the sentence)
Better! Make sure you always have one subject, verb and object in your sentences.